I am but a waiting weed
Needing for the train
Air conditioner over me
I pretend it’s rain
If a haiku is 5x7x5, what is 7x5x7x5?
Super reverse haiku?
Seriously, though. Does this count as haiku?
Edit: Nevermind ~ it’s not a thing. But it works great. So I name it Bremku, henceforth.
But a waiting weed
Train’s A/C stops over me
I pretend it’s rain
There, I fixed it for you.
I have a new friend
Who made a Bremku into
A brand new haiku
~ your’s is wonderful!!! thank you so much!!!
Just your friendly neighborhood English major, doing my civic duty. o7
English major plans
Civic Duty Spiderman
Words like web from cans
I, a waiting weed
Train’s A/C drips over me
This, for want of rain
Heh, yeah. Could definitely be refined further. But I wanted to keep edits to a minimum.
I think that’s just… A poem
Oh. Didn’t know 'em.
what is even the deal with haikus? why are they considered so great?
For me the cadence makes it feel like intro development conclusion.
It’s like a short story in poetic format
I am but a wanting weed
Growing with the Sun
The train has rolled right over me
My life has been undone
I am but a thriving weed
Dulled not once, but twice
Let them bring it back to me
I shall sow it thrice!
In germany the train schedule is so bad not even a cactus that needs a drop of water in a thousand years could rely on the deutsche bahn.
What happened? I was there 15 years ago and it was atomic-clock levels of accuracy.
An broken atomic-clock it right 2 tines a day?
Pot twist: Its a plot plant…
Stonedest comment of the day
Bruh, its been 17 hours, pass the joint homie!
That’s how we smoke them here while waiting for the Deutsche Bahn. It probably will be another 17 hours before the train arrives, but who knows? Bauen wir noch eine Tüte.
Cherry picking.
These are just weeds growing in the rail reserve, of which there are many billions which do not receive the life giving drips from the air con condenser on a briefly stopped passenger carriage.
In a couple of days the maintenance crew will spray them with glyphosate and this “tiny ecosystem” will cease to exist.
DSB? Those train car colors remind me of Copenhagen
It’s the Keiyo Line in Tokyo, Japan.
I don’t think so, all the doors are fully flush with the sides of the car here. I was guessing eastern asia based on the zoomed in photo text (千)
