The Picard Maneuver@piefed.world to memes@lemmy.worldEnglish · 1 month agoThere should be a name for thismedia.piefed.worldimagemessage-square107linkfedilinkarrow-up1525arrow-down114
arrow-up1511arrow-down1imageThere should be a name for thismedia.piefed.worldThe Picard Maneuver@piefed.world to memes@lemmy.worldEnglish · 1 month agomessage-square107linkfedilink
minus-squareKatana314@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1·1 month agoI uploaded some now slightly-outdated versions of the first few chapters to Royal Road. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/100178/rangers-of-the-frostscape
minus-squarestinky@redlemmy.comlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1·1 month agoThis is really good I like how we can see into the character’s head. We get his senses (darkness and snowflakes from his vision, blood on his hands from touch) and his memories (the priest). It makes him very human (Klyskin?). I dig it
I uploaded some now slightly-outdated versions of the first few chapters to Royal Road.
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/100178/rangers-of-the-frostscape
This is really good
I like how we can see into the character’s head. We get his senses (darkness and snowflakes from his vision, blood on his hands from touch) and his memories (the priest). It makes him very human (Klyskin?). I dig it